The art style is beautiful but in some parts it felt a bit awkward. The plot itself was a nice little play on the imaginary friends and misunderstandings, but the progression was a bit abrupt and we never did learn the bonds that Dimitri and Quail went through that and the friendship between Caleb and Carson. The grammar was a bit awkward but not that bad. I think it would have been great if it wasn't so limited due to the jam and its restriction but I did enjoy playing through it and seeing the nice art!
thank you for the feedback! I was definitely on a time crunch towards the end of it😅 probably wasn't the smartest move to make 23 CG'S in a month. (and I initially planned for there to be even more than that) I had wanted to put in more about Carson and Caleb's friendship, and Dimitri and Quail's but didn't think I'd be able to do it in the time allowanced by the jam. I plan on doing an update in the future that might add some of that stuff, plus fix some of the wonky CG's.
Ohh that's great! I'm really looking forward to the more fixed version. It is impressive you were able to churn out 23 CG's but at the same time I wonder if it was a wise decisions given how you had to do everything yourself... But either way I'm looking forward to how you'll shape the VN now that it's passed the Game Jam edition ahahah
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Can you add it on Android?
The art style is beautiful but in some parts it felt a bit awkward. The plot itself was a nice little play on the imaginary friends and misunderstandings, but the progression was a bit abrupt and we never did learn the bonds that Dimitri and Quail went through that and the friendship between Caleb and Carson. The grammar was a bit awkward but not that bad. I think it would have been great if it wasn't so limited due to the jam and its restriction but I did enjoy playing through it and seeing the nice art!
thank you for the feedback! I was definitely on a time crunch towards the end of it😅 probably wasn't the smartest move to make 23 CG'S in a month. (and I initially planned for there to be even more than that) I had wanted to put in more about Carson and Caleb's friendship, and Dimitri and Quail's but didn't think I'd be able to do it in the time allowanced by the jam. I plan on doing an update in the future that might add some of that stuff, plus fix some of the wonky CG's.
Ohh that's great! I'm really looking forward to the more fixed version. It is impressive you were able to churn out 23 CG's but at the same time I wonder if it was a wise decisions given how you had to do everything yourself... But either way I'm looking forward to how you'll shape the VN now that it's passed the Game Jam edition ahahah
I am in love with this story.
Please, can you add a CG gallery?
I'm not entirely sure how to program that, but I'll look into it. I plan on doing some updates to clean things up in the future.
Ok, thank you
I got both endings. The art style is beautiful. I love it.
thank you! there are three endings actually lol
Oh! I miss count. I did get all the endings.
it just have one end?
there are three endings
It look interesting.
Thanks!:)